You Know Who You Are
November 9th, 2010 § 6 Comments
Since I made the “hour” committment to my coach – who clearly has extraordinary patience – I had to look for inspiration this weekend. And I had no excuse not to write because I was on a bus both days, traveling to an unveiling out of town. I expected to find a poem at the ceremony, but instead this one came. You know who you are. I love you, kiddo.
You Know Who You Are
You loll side-by-side tucked tight and feed honey to each other.
Your long handled wooden spoons on public view.
You stir, he rolls.
He licks, you sigh.
Impervious.
Impervious.
This is what was worth the past -
the years of wiping noses
of rising every dawn
the falling empty on the sword
of teaching them to drive -
You growled at every threat and bristled at each touch.
You trusted only ducks and cats and greeny growing things.
Not loved. Not loved. Seared into yourself by loneliness.
You are enveloped now: vapor leaks from every pore as heavy scented
as the alchoholic’s morning after.
No razors penetrate and scraps heal with every touch.
You blink and roll and sigh and dare the morning to arrive.
I just wanted to say I like your poem. Another thing is my name is actually the same as yours. My maiden name is Pamela Lynn Villars. I got married at the age of 18 and went to the last name of Swaney.
I was just wondering, What is your middle name?
Hope to see more of your work.
Pamela Swaney :)
Thanks, Pamela! I have no middle name. Hey, I started a Villars clan group on Facebook and we have Villars from all over the globe. I hope you join us.
I keep on forgetting how well you write.
Pity you can’t keep churning out more of these beauties. I love your poems.Been busy lately…you will be hearing from me shortly.
Love
Rall
Like this Pamela… so much of your writing is like honey and flame. Superfluous praise, better just what your poem says. Delicate yet precise, an eagle’s eye sight. I am thankful you are trusted with such words as these.
thank goodness for mass transit and uninspiring ceremonies
Two days on a bus counts for something. Nice.