On a Summer Afternoon in Austin

2009 June 25

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Sweltering heat, shifting shadows, slithering
ripples cross tarry roads; my heel sinks into
the asphalt, the solidity of my traveler’s path
sunken now, as I swim through the

airless heat. All of us panting, dry, tripping lightly,
the pads of our feet playing hot potato with
the street beneath. But we need to run, we need
to smell the sweat of us and others who

are bold enough to brave this newness.
This apocalyptic energy that is our future.

Postscript: 105 is the new 90.

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11 Responses leave one →
  1. 2009 June 26

    Living in the central San Joaquin Valley of California, I can certainly identify with this in a literal sense.

  2. 2009 June 28

    It’s great. So very lyrical. I liked how the first stanza is personal and the second and third shift from “my” to “our” The personal experience becomes all of ours. We’re getting global warmed to death… Well, that’s what I got from it.

    • 2009 June 29

      Thanks, Alan. That’s the way I saw it too.

      We are entering a Brave New World – a sticky sweaty one.

  3. 2009 July 1

    Kewl.

    Makes me glad that Connecticut doesn’t hit that triple digit zone, just the high double digits with the resulting brown outs.

    • 2009 July 1

      You missed the point – it is so not kewl… ;-)

      I can’t believe you brown out in the 90s. Pffft!

  4. 2009 July 1

    I know, Connecticut is such a wimpy state. Lots of power needs and too much of the NIMBY syndrome to prevent it from being fixed.

    • 2009 July 1

      Yes, but you’re lucky. I’m just jealous – you have real seasons.

      • 2009 July 2

        This is true….However, sometimes the transition of spring/summer and summer/fall is so gradual that you have to look at a calendar to double check what season you’re supposed to be in. Winter has been strange of well as of late. Usually the cold doesn’t really kick in until January.

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